In their own universe
She walks slowly, carrying several bags full of groceries from the supermarket. At her age, she says she doesn't need anyone's help; and, in fact, it's true. Despite her advanced age, she is a very independent and lucid woman, who coordinates her thoughts perfectly. Solitary like no other, but effective when it comes to analyzing and acting.
She looks for a place to sit, she doesn't mind being in front of a piano, in fact she looks at it, but she creates her own universe wherever she goes, at her age everything she does is for her well-being, as she always says, the time she has left is for her and in fact it is, she thinks... if they tell me to get up from here I will... while I go to rest.
She sits down to read several pages, reading calmly as if she were at home; she creates her own world, nothing else matters.
"Suddenly, she bursts out laughing... On one of the sheets, there's a phrase that says... 'Mother......remember, you CAN'T sit just anywhere... think, honey, I already did it hahaha.' It's the grocery list her daughter wrote for her."
You proved with this piece you are able to write and you even wrote something good.
Your title fits great and your hashtags are 👍
Well done, I am proud of you.
This booming vote is yours and well deserved.
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Wow, thank you so much..... I love writing and I try to add a touch of humor so the story doesn't get monotonous. As true writers say, I put a little piece of myself into my stories.
Does this mean you are a funny guy or one full of surprises? I thought you only smiled if tired and halfway to Dreamland...
If it comes to it we always add a piece of ourselves to what we write. It makes the story better, fiction included.
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hahaha, I'm usually tired when I finish my workday, but I go for a run, so I fall asleep even more tired.
I like the ending, you make me laugh, your story is very realistic, that's why I like it. Good luck in the contest
hahaha, From the moment I started writing, I envisioned this ending.
Haha.. thank you for making me laugh! I liked how you started, a serious description of the lady and the ending is hilarious! :)
Exactly, that's how it should start, that was the idea, I thought.... We'll see how monotonous the story is, so much so that users won't even bother reading it. But those who do will smile a little. Stories like that have a certain realism; that's how we humans are, especially people of this age. I say this because of some neighbors I have, and I like spending time with them.