Assuming your main content is the article, it's above average length? Might be just me who prefer quick short info, but i think you can shorten the writing just a lil bit more.
The comic strips are way too small & crampy? I'm viewing this on phone, not sure if its any different when viewed on pc. Perhap reduce panel amount or arrange it vertically.
Btw, my condolences to your wallet ='(
Hey there @izziqbal, it's a shame you couldn't get your wallet back.
Yeah for me at last I found the post a little on the long side, it could have been better (for me at least) if the story was divided in two posts or just summarized a little more.
I have to agree with @leoblaze regarding the format, I'm also using my phone and find it hard to appreciate the art. Vertical panes are really the way to go here, even more if you're doing a comic strip. But still the art is solid, I liked it.
Assuming your main content is the article, it's above average length? Might be just me who prefer quick short info, but i think you can shorten the writing just a lil bit more.
The comic strips are way too small & crampy? I'm viewing this on phone, not sure if its any different when viewed on pc. Perhap reduce panel amount or arrange it vertically.
Btw, my condolences to your wallet ='(
Yeah, it is actually way above average. This post is about 1000+ words in it. I'll try to maintain somewhere between 400-600 words next time.
As for the device viewing, I'm glad you mentioned that. I guess this post does favor more to PC users since most of the comic I did are horizontal.
I think it is better to go more vertical next time.
Thanks @leoblaze, I really appreciated the well thought out feedback!
No prob!
Hey there @izziqbal, it's a shame you couldn't get your wallet back.
Yeah for me at last I found the post a little on the long side, it could have been better (for me at least) if the story was divided in two posts or just summarized a little more.
I have to agree with @leoblaze regarding the format, I'm also using my phone and find it hard to appreciate the art. Vertical panes are really the way to go here, even more if you're doing a comic strip. But still the art is solid, I liked it.
Yup, I was actually thinking to do an episode with 2 parts.
I think can try this in Episode 4 later but for now, I'm gonna start simple for the next episode :]
Thanks for the feedback @cobmaximus
yeah keep up the good work!
Whoa ;; You're really had to put up with all that. I seriously have no idea. Poor you pats pats
I survived with my laundry money coins for 3 days, fortunately xD
Awwh! you had such a journey TT at least you got a fairly decent grade 🙏🏻
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger :)
The haze was definitely a challenging one, sir 😖
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