Am agree with your point that everyone has their own journey and we should never compare our progress with others. Sometimes we forget to appreciate our small achievements because we are too busy looking at what others have accomplished. I also loved your thought that success is not always visible, loud . Becoming a better person, learning from our little mistakes, and finding the courage to face difficult situations are achievements too.(It's amazing point and seriously you describe it beautifully).
I believe real success is when we can achieve our dreams without losing our peace, happiness,precious moments and relationship.