Dear @ruthchi,

Thank you for posting on steemit. Find below some comments, and improvement suggestions for your post.

Pls Consider using a catchy tittle with a glimpse of the day as against just how I spent my day.

Endeavor to use justify alignment markdown to your post to make it more appealing and aligned and also use markdown for your pictures too.

Photographs Used photos are clear and also consider using more of landscape pictures as it gives your post better outlook and avoid having long pictures and add captions on the photos too.

One selfie is okay for your diary game and the other pictures can tell the story of the day. Avoid too much selfies and repeat photographs to avoid making your post look cluttered.

We do hope you will consider these suggestions and improve your post.
Thanks and keep creating more quality contents.

#s34improvement