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RE: SLC33-W3: My Community, My Story – Transportation in My Area
Review/Grading Format
Category Points
| Content Quality | 2.9 |
|---|---|
| Original Photos | 2.5 |
| Storytelling relevant | 2 |
| Location | 1.4 |
| Creativity & Presentation | 1 |
| Total | 9.8 Points |
Review:
Some rural areas have fewer transportation systems, and rickshaws, motorcycles, and vehicles are the most commonly found means of transportation in rural areas. The only problem with rickshaw as a means of transportation is that it cannot go to far places; instead, it is used for internal transport. Friend, I advise you to avoid using words that don't relate to the topic and also avoid typographical errors, as a lot is detected in your publication. Communication is different from transportation so saying communication or transportation doesn't match.
Thank you very much for your comments. I am also very happy to know that you have reviewed the issues very carefully. However, I should correct all these mistakes. This will improve the quality of the post. Thank you very much for your kind comments and grateful advice.