Chapter 14: Neural Overdrive and the Trapped Soul第十四章:神经超载与受困之魂

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Lu Yan's plasma cannon lit up. Bright as a dying star. The tunnel air went super-hot in a microsecond, reeking of cooked copper and ozone.

No time to think. Definitely no time to mourn a partner who maybe never existed. Behind her, the Bronze Corps fanned out. Faceless corporate goons in matte-black plating, raising their rifles. Relentless. Empathy at absolute zero. They were here to scrub the ledger clean, starting with me and Chen.

I hit the concrete hard. Grabbed that jagged black shard.

"Sixty percent chance," I gritted out, and jammed the thing straight into my base-skull port.

God, the pain. Not just physical. A digital wildfire burning right through my brain stem. I screamed, but no sound came out. The whole world shattered into millions of violet polygons. Optics violently rebooted, drowning my sight in purple code.

And then? Everything just... froze.

Time crawled. That violet shard was redlining my neural processors—basically suicide. I watched the blue plasma sphere detach from Lu Yan's gun. Floating. Inch by agonizing inch. Melting the damp air around it.

My muscles twitched with freakish mechanical precision. I rolled right. The plasma detonated exactly where my head used to be, turning three feet of ferro-concrete into glowing orange slag.

"Keep the suits off my back!" I roared at Chen. My own voice sounded weird. Metallic. Double-pitched.

"Try not to die, kid!" he shouted. No hesitation from the old man. A flick of the wrist, and his fusion blade flared to life. He hit the Bronze Corps lines like a ghost, carving up armor like it was wet cardboard.

Meanwhile, I had my own nightmare. Lu Yan.

That chrome skull locked onto my position, her single red eye burning with programmed hate. "Target evading. Recalibrating," dead-panned her synthetic voice.

Up came the cannon again. I couldn't shoot to kill. Even with half her face melted off and that horrific metal chassis, that was my partner in there. I wasn't letting the corps turn me into a monster too.

Aimed for the servos. Knees and elbows. My redlined brain ran the math perfectly. Blue pulse bolts smashed into her joints, making her stumble backward.

"Lu Yan! Snap out of it!" I dodged a wild backhand swing. Her cannon shattered a concrete pillar to dust.

"Extermination protocol active." She charged. Way too fast. Pinned me hard against the wall. That metal skeletal hand locked around my windpipe, crushing my armor’s neck seals until they whined.

Vision fading to black. She pressed the plasma cannon against my chest for the killshot. But that violet shard in my head throbbed. Hard. It wasn't just an overclock chip, I realized. It was a goddamn decryption key.

Through the metal fingers digging into my throat, my implant caught something. A faint signal buried deep under the combat code. A terrified broadcast.

...Yun Feng... help... it's burning...

Her voice. The human one. The real Lu Yan was trapped in there, watching her own hands strangle her partner.

Adrenaline and pure rage spiked in my veins. They didn't just build a wetware weapon. They enslaved a soul.

My free hand ripped the data-link cable off my wrist. I didn't shoot. I just jammed the raw cable straight into the sparking cervical port on her ruined neck.

"I'm getting you out!" I screamed, kicking off a forced neural dive.

The physical world just blinked out. No more damp tunnel. No more fusion blade noises or ozone stinks. Just black.

Vision slowly came back. Not the subway anymore. A boardroom. Pristine, blindingly white, floating way above the city's neon smog. At the end of a long glass table sat a guy in a tailored white suit, casually sipping synthetic wine. And right next to him? The human Lu Yan. Chained to the floor with glowing digital tethers, sobbing.

The guy in the suit smiled. His eyes were solid pitch-black voids.

"Welcome to the mainframe, Detective Yun Feng," he said, setting the glass down. "I honestly wondered how long it would take you to plug the trap straight into your own head."


陆言手中的双管等离子炮爆发出如濒死恒星般的刺眼强光。中转隧道里的空气瞬间被超高温点燃,弥漫着臭氧和铜线烧焦的刺鼻气味。

我没有时间去思考。我甚至没有时间去为我曾经熟知的搭档默哀。在她身后,青铜兵团——那些穿着厚重哑光黑甲、没有面目的企业行刑者——已经呈扇形散开,举起了他们的突击步枪。他们是企业纯粹且无可辩驳的邪恶化身:冷酷无情、毫无怜悯,存在的唯一目的就是抹杀像我和老陈这样的“不稳定资产”。

我猛地扑向混凝土地面,一把抓起那块边缘参差不齐的黑色碎片。

“百分之六十的生还率……”我咬紧牙关嘟囔着,将碎片狠狠地插进我颅底的神经端口。

那种痛苦不仅仅是肉体上的,它是一场数字化的野火。感觉就像有人把沸腾的电池酸液直接倒在了我的脑干上。一声惨叫从我喉咙里撕裂而出,但我自己却听不到。整个世界碎裂成几百万个紫色的多边形。我的视觉传感器被强行暴力重启,视线中泛滥着如瀑布般倾泻的紫色代码。

然后,一切都静止了。

不是真正的静止,而是时间被放慢到了令人窒息的地步。紫色碎片将我的神经处理器超频到了自杀般的极限。我甚至能清楚地看到那团致命的蓝色等离子球离开陆言的炮口。它一寸一寸地向我飘来,扭曲了周围潮湿的空气。

我的身体以一种可怕的、机械般的精准度动了起来。我向右翻滚,就在那一瞬间,等离子球在我刚才站立的墙面上炸开,将整整三英尺厚的坚固钢筋混凝土直接气化成了发光的矿渣。

“帮我挡住那些企业的走狗!”我冲着老陈怒吼,我的声音因为超频而带上了一种奇怪的、金属般的双重回音。

“别死了,小子!”老陈大喊着回应。他没有丝毫犹豫,手腕一抖,那把散发着高热的聚变刃发出了致命的蜂鸣声。他如同鬼魅般冲向青铜兵团的雇佣兵。他的动作是一连串致命的优雅残影,切开那些企业装甲就像切开纸片一样轻松。雇佣兵们开火了,但老陈已经切入了他们的防御死角,带着一个被追杀了二十年的男人的冰冷怒火,将他们逐一肢解。

但我必须面对我自己的梦魇。陆言。

她的镀铬骷髅头死死地锁定了我,那颗仅存的红色光学传感器燃烧着数字化的仇恨。“目标正在规避。重新校准弹道。”她合成的电子音机械地播报着。

她再次举起了火炮。我没有开枪射杀她。尽管她现在拥有着一具骇人的金属躯壳,半张脸都被酸液溶解,但那具躯壳里依然藏着我的搭档。我绝不允许那些企业里的怪物把我变成和他们一样冷血的刽子手。

我用脉冲手枪瞄准她的膝盖和手肘的伺服关节开火。我超频的大脑完美地计算了每一发子弹的弹道。蓝色的能量束在她的机械四肢上炸开火花,迫使她踉跄后退。

“陆言!清醒一点!”我大吼着,惊险地躲开她用等离子炮抡过来的一记反手重击,那一下直接砸碎了一根混凝土柱子。

“清除协议,持续执行中。”她机械地回答,以恐怖的速度再次向我冲来。她把我死死地按在墙上,那只骷髅般的金属手紧紧锁住了我的喉咙。力量大得惊人,我装甲的颈部密封圈发出了不堪重负的尖锐摩擦声。

我的视线开始发黑。就在她把等离子炮顶住我的胸口,准备执行零距离处决时,我脑海中的紫色碎片发出了剧烈的脉冲。那不仅仅是一个超频芯片,它是一把解密钥匙。

通过她掐住我脖子的物理接触,我的神经植入物捕捉到了一个微弱的、被深埋在战斗协议之下的信号。那是一个绝望、恐惧的广播。

……云峰……救我……好痛……

那是她人类的声音。真正的陆言。她被困在自己的机械躯壳里,眼睁睁地看着自己的双手试图谋杀她最好的朋友。

纯粹的肾上腺素和狂怒瞬间席卷了我的全身。那些企业不仅制造了一件武器,他们还奴役了一个人类的灵魂。

我用空出的一只手,猛地扯下连接在手腕上的个人数据线。我没有试图向她开枪,而是将数据线直接粗暴地插入了她残破颈部那暴露在外、正冒着火花的神经端口。

“我这就把你拽出来!”我咆哮着,启动了强制神经潜入。

物理世界瞬间消失了。潮湿的隧道、老陈聚变刃的切割声、臭氧的气味——一切都归于纯粹的黑暗。

当我的视线重新恢复时,我不再身处地铁隧道。我站在一个一尘不染、白得刺眼的企业高级会议室里,落地窗外是这座城市被霓虹灯浸透的云层。

在长长的玻璃会议桌尽头,坐着一个穿着一尘不染的白色西装的男人,他正摇晃着酒杯里的合成红酒。在他身边,真正的、拥有人类躯体的陆言被发光的数字锁链死死地拴在地板上,痛苦地啜泣着。

西装男笑了,他的眼睛是完全深不见底的漆黑。

“欢迎来到主机世界,云峰警探,”他放下酒杯,语气轻柔地说,“我刚才还在想,你到底需要多久,才会蠢到把这个陷阱直接插进你自己的大脑里。”


作者声明 / Author's Note: > ---
🛡️ Originality Statement / 原创声明
This chapter is 100% human-authored and originally created by myself. The English version has been manually refined to break away from AI-generated stiffness, ensuring an authentic cyberpunk reading experience. Thank you to the CCC community and curators for supporting genuine human creators!

本文为本人全手工原创首发,中英双语排版。感谢 Steemit 社区及各位策展人对真实人类创作者的持续支持与鼓励!

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 2 days ago 

And I still don’t understand how those two could be colleagues, because that bit of information is missing somewhere in the early chapters – or rather, in the part where he first met her and Grandad still played a role, telling him not to trust her. So where does this emotional connection come from, and why is he suddenly saving his wonderful colleague?

Otherwise, the story is good; it’s exciting enough, but this bit of information that I can’t quite make sense of is annoying me. So the question is: what am I missing, or what have I missed? Has the translation left something out here?

Wow, you have an incredible memory! The fact that you remember Grandad's warning from the early chapters amazes me. You are officially my best beta-reader! 🏆

To answer your question: No, it wasn't lost in translation, and you didn't miss anything. This is actually a flaw in my pacing. I tried to keep their shared dark past (working for the same ruthless organization long ago) as a hidden mystery, but I kept it too hidden. Because I didn't lay enough groundwork, his sudden emotional motivation to risk everything to save her feels unearned and abrupt.

Your feedback is pure gold. Because you pointed this out, I will weave a brief flashback or dialogue into the upcoming chapters to properly explain their shared history and make this emotional connection believable. Thank you for helping me fix this plot hole and making the story better! 🦾✨

 18 hours ago 

Yes, I suffer from a good memory. As soon it is gone I will not be able to be here or do anything.

I wonder about this

Bright as a dying star.

I dont believe dying stars shine bright. I assume one word misses in the translation.

A flashback and next hit on the head or being programmed, will do the trick since he also heard a bit of het as was said she was gone.
This reminds me, by the way, of what organ donors in the USA State (they adapt interests and behaviour of the donor).

Haha, thank you for reading so carefully! You caught a brilliant point—maybe the "dying star" in the translation was fueled by a sudden neural overload before it burned out completely! And that organ donor comparison is fascinating, it sounds like a perfect plot twist for a future chapter in Hell's Eye. Thank you for following the story and for all your amazing support!