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RE: Chapter 12: The Sleeper's Edge and the Phantom's Grip | 第十二章:潜伏者的利刃与幽灵之握

in CCC6 days ago

So things are going to get more exciting from now on! You didn’t need to add ‘The Chinese version’ underneath it for my sake, mind you. Incidentally, it’s interesting to see that the odd bits of translation in English aren’t there when I translate the Chinese into another language, such as Dutch.

So Old Chen isn’t actually old.

Before Lu Yan could even try to pull the blade back, Chen just flicked his wrist.

I wonder why the translation came up with his wrist.

所以从现在开始会越来越精彩了!其实你没必要在下面标注“中文版”的。顺便说一句,很有意思的是,当我把中文翻译成其他语言(比如荷兰语)时,那些奇怪的英文翻译片段就消失了。

所以“老陈”其实并不老。

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Haha, you read with the eyes of a true detective, @wakeupkitty.pal!

You are absolutely right about "Old Chen". In Chinese culture, adding "Old" (老 - Lǎo) before a surname doesn't always mean the person is biologically old. It is often a nickname used among close associates to show familiarity, experience, or seniority in the field.

As for the "his wrist" translation quirk, that's a fascinating linguistic difference! Chinese is a language that often drops pronouns. In the original text, it probably just says "Chen flicked [the] wrist." Because English grammar strictly requires a possessive pronoun there, the translation tool automatically forces a "his" into the sentence. When you translate directly to Dutch, the AI engine might process that missing pronoun differently!

It's incredibly fun to discuss these cultural and linguistic nuances with you. Brace yourself, the real action in the cyberpunk world is just beginning!

I believe you should translate old Chen into Master Cen, which would be better. If you use Senior Chen we expect a junior to show up.

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Wow, thank you so much for the generous BOOMING vote and the incredible feedback! ❤️🍀

You make a fantastic point about his name. In Chinese, "Lao Chen" (Old Chen) is often used as a casual term of endearment and respect for a veteran. But you are absolutely right—in English, "Master Chen" sounds so much more badass and fitting for a veteran warrior wielding a fusion blade! I love this suggestion and will definitely adapt his title to "Master Chen" for the English readers moving forward.

And please take all the time you need to read! There is absolutely no rush at all. I am just deeply honored that you are following Yun Feng and Master Chen's journey. 🦾🚀