Hello @necnon, I like to suggest that when next you write a post on steemit platform in any Community of your choice, try and be making use of the correct hashtags, do paragraphing a priority because your work needs to be rearranged to attract readers.
Reached out to your mentor and use his or her guide that you were thought and make a good post that will make you to receive good votes from other users.

#s34improvement