Hello @prexioz, you are welcome to steemit,but let me suggest that you should meet with your mentor for for advice on how to make use of markdowns, paragraphing your works, making use of photograph.
As a newbie,there are hashtags you supposed to use not using what is not of steemit standard.
It will not make other users see your post.
I suggest that you improve to meet up steemit standard.
#s34improvement