Hello @pre-eminent01,
Thanks for sharing this post with us.
Pls consider these improvements..
On the post title, this post is a diary game and attaching the date alongside the tittle would be great and also making the tittle more catchy.

Your thumbnail image is not that appealing. A good thumbnail image gives your post a great first impression cos that what we see first. Consider using a better and clear thumbnail image for your posts.

The markdown styling for your last image tag is not well placed. Always lookout for appropriate markdown placements for your pictures and post.

For your pictures, consider using uniform picture formats throughout your posts such as landscape images all through as against using both portrait and lanscape at the same time for uniformity in the post outlook.
Hopefully you out these into consideration as you keep posting.
#s34improvement