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RE: SLC33-W5: My Community, My Story – Festivals, Culture & Traditions
Review/Grading Format
Category Points
| Content Quality | 3 |
|---|---|
| Original Photos | 2.5 |
| Storytelling relevant | 2 |
| Location | 1 |
| Creativity & Presentation | 0.8 |
| Total | 9.3 Points |
Review:
Independence Day is very important to every country, which is usually when countries celebrate their freedom and sovereignty. However, friend, you didn't show an image of how it is celebrated; instead, you showed an image of artwork, whereas one with people was taken from afar while they were walking.