Hi @haideremtiaz, thank you for participating in the "Week-02: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Travel Diary."

Reading through your post you made mentioned of traveling to visit your brothers ,family and sisters.I can see it was a great time exploring the river side in your village.You enjoyed everything along the river side.

My observation is that your post sound like a normal diary and not travel diary .Take us along your journey by saying your means of transportation.The challenges you face , how you reach your travel destination.Placed you explore .Atleast, with photos etc.Travel diary should sound like normal diarygame.You didn’t engage in other authors post atleast three.Next time reason the rules well before participating.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 3.5marks
• Following the rules: 0.5marks
• Markdown Usage: 1 mark
• Comments: 0Mark

Scores| 05/10