Poem: Fuel of Hate

vanzessen (25)in #poetry • 9 years ago

The anger burns inside, like a fuel of hate, is going to my veins.

I didn't wish to feel this anger.

I didn't wish to feel this pain.

And deep inside I feel this hatred.

Are hate and love not related?

I thought you understood and be patient.

But in the end, you were the one who created...

This anger.

9 years ago in #poetry by vanzessen (25)

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mylittleblurbs (46) 9 years ago

I totally get it.But in the end, you were the one who created. That was very powerful.

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vanzessen (25) 9 years ago

Thanks, @mylittleblurbs! It's my first English poem I have ever written haha. If you have any feedback, I would appreciate it! :)

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mylittleblurbs (46) 9 years ago

Well even better. No feedback, other than it is great. You can check out my stuff and comment and follow if you like.

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