please give feedback on article

sydneysweden (56)in #writing • 10 years ago (edited)

Please give me feedback on my writing in this article.

I will share 20% of the earnings of the article evenly with everyone who has given me meaningful feedback.

most important to me is grammar feedback.

The feedback is to be given on this page.

10 years ago in #writing by sydneysweden (56)

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jamtaylor (71) 10 years ago (edited)

Would you prefer feedback here, or on the article?

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sydneysweden (56) 10 years ago

The feedback is to be given on this page.

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