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RE: Challenge: “Exquisite poetic corpse” No. 4/ Reto: “Cadáver exquisito poético” Nº 4

in Dream Steem • 2 days ago (edited)

My heart spoke in its own intimate language—
free,
without regrets,
with no gods to sit in judgment—
and I,
a subject to its desires,
(obeyed).

Mi corazón hablaba en su lenguaje intimo
libre
Sin remordimientos
sin dioses que lo juzguen
y yo
súbdito de sus deseos
(obedecía).

Invito a @marcybetancourt.

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obeyed my heart,
but my mind, in a clear sense, refuses.
You have an organized life;
it is not my place to (destroy)

obedecía a mi corazón,
pero mi mente en un sentido claro se niega.
Tienes una vida organizada;
no soy quién para ( destruir ).

Destroy is not the love I came to give,

I love you enough to let you live,

So I fold my verses and step out of your view (away)