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RE: "Después de los villancicos, la sombra"
Wow, this story took an unexpected turn. I initially thought it was just going to be about Christmas songs and the joy they bring, but the ending was quite dark.
Actually I really like how the story connected the lives of two women through the same man's actions. It reminds us that dishonesty and bad decisions can leave others with pain and regret. The way you built the suspense before revealing the ending was really interesting. Well narrated, my friend!
Muchas gracias por tu comentario y apoyo..!
Esa era mi idea original darle un giro inesperado para enseñar que hay pecados que matan..!